The Comeback Kitchen

Chapter 6 of 12

The Fourth Saturday

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Walt ordered forty pancakes.

"Forty," I said.

"You heard me." He slapped two twenties on the counter. "And don't you dare give me change."

I made forty pancakes in the next hour, four at a time, then six when I figured out the cold corner of the griddle. Hector took over the money without asking. A woman from the core room named Bernadette took over Maisie, who'd woken up and was charging people a quarter for a crayon drawing of their face. Somebody went into Hobbs's and came out with a carafe of coffee, which I didn't ask about.

Walt ate his standing beside the hatch, the way Nell had.

"These are your dad's," he said.

"These are a stranger's. I found a notebook."

"They taste like your dad's." He wiped his mustache with the back of his wrist. "I should've said something in that room, Ben. With the lanyard woman."

"There was nothing to say."

"There's always something to say. I just didn't." He crumpled his paper plate and looked across at the factory. "Same time next Saturday?"


It spread the way news spreads in a town with nothing else to talk about.

The second Saturday there were sixty. The third, the line went past the bus shelter, and a kid from the high school took a picture and it went around on everybody's phone with the caption CHEAPEST BREAKFAST IN KESSLING AND ALSO THE BEST. I started doing weekdays, too. Five until seven-fifteen, for the first-shift crowd going in, then I'd close the hatch and drive Maisie to school with her hair still in a sleep knot.

That was the part I wasn't proud of. On weekdays she came with me at four-thirty in the morning because there was nobody else. Mrs. Ocampo was eighty-one. Teddy was at work by five-forty-five. So Maisie slept in the back of Pamela on a nest of flour sacks under my old work coat, with a little space heater from the hardware store running at her feet, and I'd look back at her every few minutes between batches.

Nell saw it on a Tuesday. She'd come off shift and walked down to Tannery Road for her pancakes, the way she did now three mornings a week. She looked through the back window at Maisie, curled up with her hat over her face.

"She can't sleep on flour forever, Ben."

"I know."

"I'm not saying it to be a jerk."

"I know that, too." I flipped two. "Where else is she going to sleep?"

Nell didn't answer. She paid her two dollars, and then she reached through the hatch and put a third one on the counter, folded small. When I looked at her she said, "That's for the space heater. It's a nice space heater," and walked off before I could give it back.

I made the rent that month. Most of it. I paid Linden Court seven hundred of the nine-forty and they took the notice off our door and put a new one on that said PAYMENT PLAN, which Maisie thought was a big improvement. She read it every time we went in.

Darrell Hobbs put a sign in his window. BREAKFAST SPECIAL 5.99, FREE REFILLS, REAL PLATES. The real plates part was aimed at me. I bought one of his specials on the Wednesday to be polite. The eggs were good. I left him two dollars.


On the morning of the fourth Saturday I pulled into the gravel lot at five-ten and somebody was already there.

She was standing beside the bus shelter in a navy county jacket, holding a clipboard against her chest like a shield. She was maybe fifty, with gray hair cut very short and reading glasses pushed up on her head, and she watched Pamela grind to a stop without changing her expression at all.

"Benjamin Calder?" She pronounced it right. I almost thanked her.

"That's me."

"Gloria Mendel. Kessling County Environmental Health." She flipped a page. "This vehicle is operating as a mobile food unit."

"It's a food truck."

"That's what a mobile food unit is." She looked at Pamela, at the pink crown on the back door, at the dragon. Something moved at the corner of her mouth and then didn't. "Do you have a mobile vendor permit?"

I didn't. I hadn't known I needed one. I'd thought, the way you think things at one in the morning in a shed, that a truck was a truck and a pancake was a pancake.

"Do you have a commissary agreement with a licensed kitchen? A fire suppression inspection? A food handler card?"

"No."

She wrote that down. She wrote it down for longer than the word no could possibly take.

"There's been a complaint," she said, without looking up.

I looked across the gravel at Hobbs's Diner. The neon coffee cup was off. The front blinds were down, all but one slat at the bottom, which was bent, like somebody had been holding it open with a finger and had just let go.

"A permit is two hundred dollars," Gloria Mendel said. "Processing is six weeks, unless the inspection is expedited, which costs more. Until then you are to cease operation, effective immediately. I'm sorry, Mr. Calder." She tore a pink sheet off her clipboard. It was the same pink as the slip from Brenner. "I'm sorry," she said again, and she did sound sorry, which made it worse.

The back door of the truck creaked. Maisie was standing in it in her pajamas and her hat, holding the corner of my work coat around her shoulders like a cape. She'd heard everything. She looked from Gloria to the pink sheet to me.

"Daddy," she said, "does that mean we lost?"